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The Shadowguard
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| Alyn_Stark | Date: Saturday, 27 April 13, 3:40 PM | Message # 1 |
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| This is a conversion request for Stark's Shadowguard minor retinue, converted in part from the last site.
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Name: Azaghor Azhirai
Age: 30 Standard Years
Homeworld: Arkania
Species: Arkanian
Height: 1.90 Meters
Weight: 196 lbs
Eyes: White
Hair: White
Known Languages:
Skill Set:
- Sniper
- Infiltration
- Slicer (minor)
Natural Abilities:
Weapons & Equipment:
- X-45 Sniper rifle (with upgraded targeting package)
- Karpaki fifty
- S-5 Heavy blaster pistol
Personal Vessel:
- Modified Tri-Mark VII Interceptor Null Echo (modified as follows)
- Advanced computer suite allowing for pilot to act as pilot, gunner and auxiliary gunner
- Prisoner holding cells and room for 18 passengers removed to allow for upgraded power to laser cannons
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Name: Rukk'khrik
Age: 25 Standard Years
Homeworld: Honoghr
Species: Noghri
Height: 1.60 Meters
Weight: 200 lbs
Eyes: Black
Hair: None
Known Languages:
Skill Set:
- Infiltration
- Wet work
- Mechanic
Natural Abilities:
- Advanced olfactory abilities
- Claws
Weapons & Equipment:
- 2x Fighting sickle
- 8x Ballistic knife
- DX-2 Disruptor pistol
Personal Vehicle:
- Modified YV-929 Armed freighter Rend (modified as follows)
- 3x Dedicated droid gunners
- Hyperdrive upgraded to Class 1.0
- Passenger room and cargo space removed for generators to power engines and weapons.
- Engine output increased by 25%
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Name: Larna Mosset
Age: 23 Standard Years
Homeworld: Malkii (claimed)
Species: Human
Height: 1.70 Meters
Weight: 140 lbs
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Red
Known Languages:
Skill Set:
- Poisons
- Infiltration
- Cooking
Natural Abilities:
Weapons & Equipment:
- 4x Vibroknives
- 8x ASN-121 Assassin droids
- Satchel of poisons
Personal Vehicle:
- Modified Pursuer-class enforcement ship Final Breath (modified as follows)
- Removal of 30 metric tons of cargo space and room for guards and prisoners
- Addition of generators to add additional power output to twin blaster cannons and ion cannon
- Addition of one extra proton torpedo launcher to bring total to two
- False IFF codes
- 220-SIG Tactical Sensor Jamming Device
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Name: Malinara Starey
Age: 28 Standard Years
Homeworld: Eshan
Species: Echani
Height: 1.85 Meters
Weight: 166 lbs
Eyes: Silver
Hair: White
Known Languages:
Skill Set:
- Close combat
- Pilot
- Infiltration
Natural Abilities:
- Mastery of Echani martial art
- Empathy during combat
Weapons & Equipment:
- 2x Dual-bladed vibro-ax
- Vibrowhip
- Neuronic whip
- Modified Model Q2 blaster pistol
Personal Vehicle:
- Modified ILH-KK Citadel-class civilian cruiser Grace of Form (modified as follows)
- Removal of 40 tons cargo capacity and space for 15 passengers
- Addition of 2 droid assistants to help with gunnery
- Addition of power generators to boost weapon strength
- Addition of chaff launchers
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Name: Gadrid Morthol
Age: 59 Standard Years
Homeworld: Panatha
Species: Epicanthix
Height: 1.72 Meters
Weight: 179 lbs
Eyes: Black
Hair: Gray
Known Languages:
Skill Set:
- Infiltration
- Close combat
- Knowledge of Jedi combat techniques and styles
Natural Abilities:
- Knowledge and creation of poisons from Mecrosa Order
Weapons & Equipment:
- 2x Force pike
- Satchel of poisons
Personal Vehicle:
- Modified Z-95-AF4 starfighter Night Arrow (modified as follows)
- Concussion missile launchers replaced by proton torpedo launchers
- Addition of IFF scrambler and jammer
- Engines overhauled to 90 MGLT
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VI
Name: Tarin Mako
Age: 40 Standard Years
Homeworld: Concordia
Species: Mandalorian
Height: 1.83 Meters
Weight: 173 lbs
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Dark brown
Known Languages:
Skill Set:
- Demolitions
- Ranged weapons expert
- Mechanics
Natural Abilities:
Weapons & Equipment:
- JT-12 Jetpack
- Dur-24 Wrist laser (left gauntlet)
- ZX flame projector (left gauntlet)
- MM9 Rocket system (right gauntlet)
- DXR-6 Disruptor rifle
- DL-22 Blaster pistol
- Modified portable E-web heavy repeating blaster
Personal Vehicle:
- Modified Amphibious Interstellar Assault Transport Flame of War (modified as follows)
- 2 twin laser turrets replaced by 2 quad laser turrets
- Rear laser turret replaced by quad laser turret
- Two antipersonnel retractable blaster cannons added (one port of cockpit, one starboard)
- Advanced computerized targeting system added to combine pilot and gunner ability
- Droid brain set as rear gunner
- Troop and prisoner capacity and equipment removed and replaced by generators to boost weapon power
- Engines reworked to 90 MGLT
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Name: Irlilia Dannen
Age: 29 Standard Years
Homeworld: Hapes
Species: Hapan
Height: 1.70 Meters
Weight: 135 lbs
Eyes: Black
Hair: Black
Known Languages:
Skill Set:
- Slicing
- Infiltration
- Camouflage
Natural Abilities:
Weapons & Equipment:
- Gun of command
- Slicing kit
Personal Vehicle:
- Modified Wayfarer-class transport Wings of Destiny (modified as follows)
- 1 laser cannons increased to 3 laser cannons
- Added 1 dorsal retractable light turbolaser
- Generator added to boost laser cannon power
- Advanced slicing kit linked to computer allowing for long-range slicing of satellites and ground systems
- Addition of universal jammer
- Addition of screamer active jammer
- Addition of repulsorlift jammer (incompatible with other jammer types)
Alyn Stark
Lord of House Stark
Governor of Kinyov Province
Owner, Stark Unified Defense (presumed)
Owner, Lorrd Engineering (presumed)
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| Jaron | Date: Tuesday, 30 April 13, 9:55 PM | Message # 2 |
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| My only hesitance here, after rather time-consuming research, is the amount of multiple-crew craft these guys use, all but three, in fact. Modifications aside, these seem to be rather large and noticeable craft for what is supposed to be a bodyguard unit. I don't know... I'm conflicted. Jace, thoughts?
Jaron Park
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| Jace_Varitek | Date: Wednesday, 01 May 13, 0:24 AM | Message # 3 |
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| I agree with Jaron, probably more strongly than he does. I think having NPC's with these powerful ships is essentially just a way of getting Stark a small fleet through the back door. I vote to DENY anything for these characters that isn't A.) a single, communal ship that they all use, or B.) individual starfighters. I also don't think we should be expected to review special abilities or special ship modifications for minor NPC characters. I vote to DENY all non-standard ship modifications (a bit of a moot point since I vote to DENY all of these ships), and the following weapons and special abilities:
- Gun of command
- Modified portable E-web heavy repeating blaster
- DXR-6 Disruptor rifle
- ZX flame projector
- Force pike
- Knowledge and creation of poisons from Mecrosa Order
- Knowledge of Jedi combat techniques and styles
- Species: Epicanthix
- Neuronic whip
- ASN-121 Assassin droids
Also, what's "Empathy during combat"?
I don't believe that an NPC should have the capability of fighting someone's fight for them. An NPC should not be a serious, credible opponent for playable characters in the RP. This is why I've voted to deny several of the above weapons or abilities that I would be fine with a playable character having (though some of these, like the Gun of Command and the Epicanthix species, I'm going to be against for PCs and NPCs alike). I also vote to DENY any more than 1 or 2 of these NPC bodyguards for Stark until he becomes a higher-profile character in the RP.
Jace Varitek
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| Jaron | Date: Wednesday, 01 May 13, 0:30 AM | Message # 4 |
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| Jace more or less took the words out of my mind. I know I was softer initially, but he essentially lays out all of my concerns here, and I agree completely. I'm going to have to DENY this as well.
Jaron Park
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| Jace_Varitek | Date: Wednesday, 01 May 13, 2:17 PM | Message # 5 |
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| I actually read this again and realized I didn't go through the entire thing. So, also:
- DX-2 Disruptor pistol
- Species: Noghri (we don't know how prevalent Noghri are in this time period but the indication is that the planet and its people are virtually unknown until the Clone Wars)
I'm actually okay with the Karpaki Fifty even though there's a potential conflict with what time period it belongs to, but such technology does exist in other eras anyway.
Jace Varitek
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| Jace_Varitek | Date: Wednesday, 01 May 13, 3:20 PM | Message # 6 |
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| Quick clarification, I didn't mean to say that you're trying to get "a small fleet through the back door." My point, poorly phrased, was that this is the effect of the request, not the intention. Sorry if I came across as rude there. The part about NPC's "fighting someone's fight for them" wasn't meant to be rude either. I just meant to say what I did, in fact, say in the following sentence, "An NPC should not be a serious, credible opponent for playable characters in the RP." Obviously, it's understandable for someone in Stark's position to have bodyguards, even quite formidable bodyguards considering the number of Jedi in the RP.
Jace Varitek
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| Alyn_Stark | Date: Wednesday, 01 May 13, 3:30 PM | Message # 7 |
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| After consideration, I'm going to make Tarin Mako into an actual PC and make a new request for Azaghor Azhirai as an NPC. I'm sure there will be one or two 'named' bodyguards in the future, but I'll remember to keep them within limits. You can close this request for now.
Alyn Stark
Lord of House Stark
Governor of Kinyov Province
Owner, Stark Unified Defense (presumed)
Owner, Lorrd Engineering (presumed)
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| Mike | Date: Sunday, 05 May 13, 12:52 PM | Message # 8 |
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| As you wish, the thread is closed.
Moderator Extraordinaire
Also good at baking
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