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Request for Profile and Planet
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| Vorn_Adasca-Draay | Date: Sunday, 04 May 14, 1:33 AM | Message # 11 |
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| Sounds good.
Vorn Adasca-Draay
Primarch, Arkanian Dominion
Minister of Science
Owner, Adasca BioMechanical Corporation
Owner, Telerath Interstellar Banking Initiative
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| Jace_Varitek | Date: Tuesday, 06 May 14, 12:53 PM | Message # 12 |
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| The caveats are very acceptable to me. I vote to APPROVE, especially now that the sub-dermal armor has been omitted. I do have one last condition, though: that Adasca-Draay not have any children, so that this "Adasca-Draay" line doesn't become a thing, which indeed it isn't in any later source. Personally, I think there's a tragic irony in all of this genetic tinkering making him sterile; that's the explanation I'd prefer, though I don't insist upon it as long as the end result is that, for whatever reason, he has no children (or if he does, they're simply for story purposes and they end up dying. Jamie's original caveat, that his offspring are sterile, would also explain why the Adasca-Draay line doesn't continue. Something along these lines).
Jace Varitek
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| Vorn_Adasca-Draay | Date: Tuesday, 06 May 14, 7:23 PM | Message # 13 |
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Lieutenant
Group: Users
Messages: 42
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| That's perfectly fine by me. Any kids will be sterile.
Vorn Adasca-Draay
Primarch, Arkanian Dominion
Minister of Science
Owner, Adasca BioMechanical Corporation
Owner, Telerath Interstellar Banking Initiative
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