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The Settlement of the Promised Worlds
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| Bane_Hax | Date: Thursday, 13 March 14, 11:23 PM | Message # 1 |
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| The Zeal of a Convert
Bane Hax's Invasion of the Induparan Crown Worlds and Usurpation of it's throne in order to perpetuate the Church of the Good Deity's Goals by growing the Celestial Kingdom of the Goddess , currently just consisting of Ord Wylan, after it's Duke signed into effect his world's subjugation to the Church.
Bane Hax, believing his worlds to be cursed due to the hostility the Republic has shown him and the abortion of the Stark Trade Deal would cause him to be at a lower ebb when he received a message from the Church of the Good Deity. Inviting missionaries to his worlds he would convert immediately and lead a Crusade to the Independent Indupar Crown Worlds which border the Senex-Juvex and who's king would have ignored the word of the Goddess. Many locals there would have been converted (especially thanks to the slick churches and basic church social security via their tithe system) so Hax would be further spurred in his zeal by he would inform the Church he would crusade against the Induparans who had not immediately embraced the faith widely.
The Indupar Crown Worlds are functionally defenseless backwaters off the main trade routes, now as per in the Galactic Civil War Era. When House Hax arrive one night, the Kingdom would be taken completely by suprise by the Warship in orbit, it would be unable to put up any attack. The Royal Family would quickly be captured. Bane would marry the King's unmarried daughter and then the others would disappear (executed and bodies dumped where they wont be found).
With Bane as the New King, he would declare fealty to the new ruler of Ord Wylan as his Emperor and King of Kings, making the worlds fiefdoms inside the bigger theocratic sovereign entity.
The worlds now under Bane Hax's crown would be surrounded with some defenses. After the missionary work from the last request , Church membership and so revenue would be up. The Church would transfer it's savings from IGBC Eriadu held accounts to a new IGBC account under Indupar Financial Laws. The Prophet would issue the "Revelation at Indupar" organizing the migration to the Indupar Worlds of Church Members.
A revelation will be posted regarding the development of the worlds by Rex, detailing his commandments for his new Kingdom; to fulfill the orders of the prophet and confirm the situation, a full list of "stuff" is below.
Requests for the Initital Takeover
- Takeover of the Induparan Crown Worlds by an Impromptu Crusade lead by Bane Hax with reinforcements from the returning Ord Wylan Crusade's Cathedral ship (number not given canonically but we will run with 20 worlds in 11 systems inhabited). All systems with populations below 10 million except Indupar itself with maybe 50 million, mostly primitive agrarian worlds living in pre-20th century conditions in all cases. Hax would be legitimate monarch from his marriage to the heir to the throne with the rest of the family dead, this would make it hard to contest.
- Overall Church Membership risen to have 3 Billion Members across the Galaxy, but spread across a thousand worlds. Profits likewise would have increased but not by much, as the new members often needed Church aid for food or didn't pay tithe)
- The Indupar Crown Worlds to be taken over with minimal bloodshed and no battles with Hax as King, under the King of Kings Gerard Rex.
- Declaring The Indupar Crown Worlds as part of the Kingdom of the Goddess, recognizing Gerard Rex as the King of Kings and Sovereign up to that point being just the Ord Wylan System, ruled by Gerard Rex (Which Rex rules as King of Kings thanks to the Duke of Ord Wylan being forced to sign a treaty to "make it wegaw")
- Indupar capital of the "Holy Kingdom of the Goddess" a new Cathedral would be raised for the King of Kings and Prophet to rule from.
- The Prophet would have a Cathedral greater than that on Eriadu begun. Also a project to be begun of infrastructure with thousands of planned communities to go up in the next few years, new roads, comm links, industrial properties, Churches and farming communities would begin if they can get settlers (through RP)
- The Worlds would at present be considered to be 1 civilized, 1 mining, the remnant all agri worlds with small populations.
The Divine Fleet
(awaiting the completion of the Cathedral ship to go on a rumoured
Construction shall be begining on a Cathedral ship
20 Armed Giga-class Freighters (Statistically the Gigantos class the Cronese Mandate had in agw), some used as cathedrals, mostly used to transport things and patrol.
10 Space Master Medium Transports (Half of the dual laser cannons on each upgraded to dual turbolasers)
4 Action-class Transports upgraded to carry 6 Turbolaser cannons (similar to the Interceptor-class but not totally refitted just with 6 TLs)
Lord Bane Hax
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| Jamie_the_Hutt | Date: Friday, 04 April 14, 7:20 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Assume this extant but with the old Procurator nerfed as Jace's
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| Mike | Date: Saturday, 05 April 14, 2:42 PM | Message # 3 |
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| In retrospect, it would have been far better had you made this request in smaller bits. While I am a part of this request, and Jace hasn't hit it yet, I'll field the first strike on it, but because I am involved in it, expect me to be more stringent, because I don't want to be seen as showing some sort of favoritism because I am involved.
I approve of Bane Hax's invasion of the Induparan Crown Worlds, though I'd prefer to see it as a not-entirely bloodless invasion. Backwater worlds or not, they'd likely put up a fight, ineffective or not.
I'm pending 20 worlds in 11 systems. For a backwater monarchy, as you say, I see it more likely to have half to a quarter of those numbers, especially for not putting up a fight. It's your terms for a counter-offer, but I am not likely to approve more than 8-10 planets in 4-6 systems.
Quote Requests for the Initital Takeover
- Takeover of the Induparan Crown Worlds by an Impromptu Crusade lead by Bane Hax with reinforcements from the returning Ord Wylan Crusade's Cathedral ship (number not given canonically but we will run with 20 worlds in 11 systems inhabited). All systems with populations below 10 million except Indupar itself with maybe 50 million, mostly primitive agrarian worlds living in pre-20th century conditions in all cases. Hax would be legitimate monarch from his marriage to the heir to the throne with the rest of the family dead, this would make it hard to contest.
- Overall Church Membership risen to have 20 Billion Members across the Galaxy, but spread across a thousand worlds. Profits likewise would have increased but not by much, as the new members often needed Church aid for food or didn't pay tithe)
- The Indupar Crown Worlds to be taken over with minimal bloodshed and no battles with Hax as King, under the King of Kings Gerard Rex.
- Declaring The Indupar Crown Worlds as part of the Kingdom of the Goddess, recognizing Gerard Rex as the King of Kings and Sovereign up to that point being just the Ord Wylan System, ruled by Gerard Rex (Which Rex rules as King of Kings thanks to the Duke of Ord Wylan being forced to sign a treaty to "make it wegaw")
- Indupar capital of the "Holy Kingdom of the Goddess" a new Cathedral would be raised for the King of Kings and Prophet to rule from.
- The Prophet would have a Cathedral greater than that on Eriadu begun. Also a project to be begun of infrastructure with thousands of planned communities to go up in the next few years, new roads, comm links, industrial properties, Churches and farming communities would begin.
- Steadily over the next three years three billion Faithful shall migrate to the nduparan Crown Worlds. Indupar shall recieve the lions share, going in population from 10 million to 1 Billion. This means the original population are a 0.00somethng minority within years.
- The Worlds of the Crown Worlds to be developed this way with the populations
It takes time for membership to rise, and based off of one crusade and the Induparan takeover, I don't buy such a quick increase. The church hasn't actually done much other than send minor recruitment missions. Drop that number by about 5 billion members and we can talk a bit more, but I'm not prepared to approve above 15 billion unless you can really convince me otherwise. Pending.
I approve of Declaring The Indupar Crown Worlds as part of the Kingdom of the Goddess, recognizing Gerard Rex as the King of Kings and Sovereign up to that point being just the Ord Wylan System, ruled by Gerard Rex (Which Rex rules as King of Kings thanks to the Duke of Ord Wylan being forced to sign a treaty to "make it wegaw")
I approve of Indupar capital of the "Holy Kingdom of the Goddess" a new Cathedral would be raised for the King of Kings and Prophet to rule from.
This is pending: The Prophet would have a Cathedral greater than that on Eriadu begun. Also a project to be begun of infrastructure with thousands of planned communities to go up in the next few years, new roads, comm links, industrial properties, Churches and farming communities would begin.
As we know, RP years can pass sort of slowly, so I'd rather not put something out like this until the RP year 'turns over.'
The following is pending for the above reason: Steadily over the next three years three billion Faithful shall migrate to the nduparan Crown Worlds. Indupar shall recieve the lions share, going in population from 10 million to 1 Billion. This means the original population are a 0.00somethng minority within years.
Quote 1 Capital World "Indupar" - Circa 1 Billion
4 Civilized Worlds - 150 Million-350 Million each
2 Mining Worlds - Circa 50 Million each
2 Factory Worlds devoted to Heavy Industry - Circa 100 each
2 Factory Worlds devoted to general manufactured goods - Circa 150 Million each
9 Agri Worlds - 20 Million each
Keeping in line with the backwater theme, I'd see Indupar as less than a solid billion. Once again, final numbers are up to you, but I'd like to see approximately 800,000 for the 'large' planet of the world. Pending.
I will approve 4x civilized worlds at 150 million each.
I will approve 1x mining world with 50 million population
I will approve 1x factory world devoted to general manufactured goods (150 million population)
I will approve 2x Agriworlds (20 million each)
I will deny 1x mining world, 2 Factory Worlds devoted to Heavy Industry, 1x Factory Worlds devoted to general manufactured goods and 7x agriworlds.
Quote Planetary Guardian Forces
Each world to be given a Minefield of Proximity and Sleeper Space Mines
All worlds but Agri Worlds given 6 H.6 Turbolaser Emplacements and 12 Cloakshape Fighters
The Civilized Worlds shall have 36 Cloakshape Fighters in addition to the other defenses each.
The Capital shall have a Theater shield over "Contispex City", in orbit it shall have a Golan I Platform, it shall also have 12 Hieronymus-class XX-9 "Mule" turrets placed around the sacred capital.
The proximity minefield is pending until I have some hard numbers at least.
The sleeper mines have stealth technology and, keeping to tradition, I am going to deny. If you want mines painted black or somesuch to make them harder to see visually, I am okay with that, pending Jace's take.
6x HX.6 turbolasers is a bit much per world, especially depending on placement, concentration, etc. I'd be more comfortable with a lower number. Pending.
I will approve 12x Cloakshape fighters per mining world and industrial world and civilized world.
I will approve of an additional 24x Cloakshape fighters per civilized world specifically.
I will approve of a theater shield on Indupar over Contispex City OR 12x XX-7 Mules, but not both.
Quote 1 Golan 1 Station Above Indupar
3 Space Colonies close to the Golan Station (temporary housing when housing not ready for residents, also for quarantine if needed)
1 Yard Above Indupar Matching these Specifications - For the repairs of the many civilian transports in and out.
1 Yard Above Indupar Matching these Specifications- To build ships for the Glory of the Kingdom
Guarded by 10 Gun Emplacements
1 Civilian Customs Station over each Civilized World.
- 4 Gun Emplacements guarding
1 Orbital Industrial Complex over each factory world.
- 4 Gun Emplacements guarding
I will approve of 1x Golan-I station over Indupar.
I will approve of 1x Golan Space Colony 1 near the Golan-1 platform. Mind you, the GSC 1 doesn't actually exist yet, but I know structures like this are hard to find for our era. I'll take Jace's thoughts on this, but provided it never becomes an armed station or is home to a fighter compliment; strictly civilian-kept, I'm okay with it.
I will approve of one repair yard over Indupar matching specifications of the Telgorn repair yard.
I am putting pending the the shipyard matching specifications and abilities of the Telgorn shipyard, largely because there is already a massive repair yard there, and because I would prefer them to have to start off smaller. I'm waiting for Jace's take on this.
I am willing to approve of 6x gun platforms for additional defense, over Indupar.
I am willing to approve of 1x Type I Light Duty Space Defense Platform over each civilian world, acting as a customs station.
I am willing to approve 4x Gun Platforms to accompany each customs station.
I will approve 1x Industrial complex over each factory world.
I will approve 4x Gun platforms to act as security for each industrial complex.
Quote The Kingdom of the Goddess Celestial Force
The Palace of the King of Kings and Cathedral shall have their own ship strength deflectors, walls and Laser Cannon Defense Turrets in large numbers.
The Cathedral shall be fitted with 20 Quadlasers and 10 Dual Turbolaser Turrets
The Palace of the King of Kings and Cathedral are pending. If they are covered by the theater shield, then I will deny their additional armaments. If not, then they are welcome to be fitted with armaments, but I want to know how many laser cannon turrets they will have.
Quote The Divine Fleet
(awaiting the completion of the Cathedral ship to go on a rumoured
Construction shall be begining on a Cathedral ship to be 8km in length (to be requested in detail when I want it completed)
"Grand Crusade" against the Hutts directly)
1 Procurator-class Cathedral Ship
- With the terrace on the dagger re-purposed to serve as a Cathedral.
- Large Hangars carry 72 Fighters but also room for 200 Freighters and Passenger ships so worshippers can worship in the Catheral.
- Speed 20 MGLT
- Hyperdrive Class 5
- Crew 50,000 + 10,000 Religious Workers
- Passengers: 250,000 pilgrims can be carried
- Armament is reduced to
320 Heavy Turbolasers
Angles of fire
80 fore
20 aft
100 port
100 starboard
20 Mounted on Turreted Towers of the Cathedral on the Terrace, may fire any direction except aft.
100 Ion Cannon Emplacements
Angles of fire
30 fore
10 aft
30 port
30 starboard
40 Quadlaser Emplacements (Mounted on and around the Cathedral, offering the terrace, Bridge and Cathedral protective arcs of fire)
2 Dreadnaught-class Heavy Cruisers (Upgraded Config weapons)
10 Munifex-class Light Cruisers
4 Etti-class Light Frigates
1 Squadron of Tri-Mark VII Interceptors
24 Hardcell-class Transports
t(half modified for troop carrying)
If there is going to be an 8 kilometer cathedral ship, then I'm going to deny the Procurator-class.
I will approve of 1x Dreadnaught-class heavy cruiser.
I will approve of 5x Munifex-class (Class 1000) cruisers
I will approve of 4x Etti-class light transports.
I will approve 20x Hardcell-class transports (half modified for troop carrying)
I will approve 12x TriMark VII interceptors
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| Bane_Hax | Date: Tuesday, 08 April 14, 9:12 AM | Message # 4 |
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| Okay. I'd like to note the 8km ship isn't ever going to be finished. Ever.
I'd like to request this to be the Cathedral ship produced instead of the others.
Instead of 8km ship and Procurator the Torturer-class Cathrdral Ship
PRODUCT INFORMATION
Manufacturer: Parts largely QOM, assembly, Induparan Holy Industrial Drive
Product Line: Batte-Cathedral
Model: Torturer-class Battle Cathrdral
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Length: 4,000 meters
MGLT: 5 megalights
Hyperdrive rating: Class 2.0 (backup Class 8.0)
Turning: No more than 45 degrees per post giving it a turning circle of 4 posts to turn around.
Forward Fixed Armament (Cannot hit anything which isn't stationary; i.e. totally redundant against enemy fighters or capital ships.
■ 4 W-80 Super Heavy Turbolaser 1/4 of the W-165s power per gun.
Broadside Fixed Armament (Fixed weapons again so can't turn to target, only worth vs static targets.
6 M-68 Magnapulse Cannon (3 Per Broadside)
Armament (Spread over hull)
■ 600 Blaster Cannons (some in top cathedral structure)
■ Heavy Repulsor Beam Array (Bridge tower)
■ 120 Turbolasers (while split over different angles, only 5 can fire to the rear and none ventrally)
■ Tractor Beam Array
MAJOR WEAKNESS SECTION HERE! NOTE!!!!
Total Ventral firing weaponary
■ 20 Blaster Cannons
Around the same rear firing.
With the majority of the ship being well shielded and armed, the ships belly would have very weak projectile shields that fighters ramming or using torps could neutralize with just a squadrons fire.
The Rear quarter of the hull has highly visible engines that if they are unshielded can be immobilized by even a pair of Munifex-class Cruisers in five minutes.
Complement:
■ 120 Starfighters (e.g. cheap Planetary Defender starfighters, etc.)
■ 6 CR90 Corvettes analogues - Cheaper copies, essentially same stats but (none have their own starfighters theyre just kept in an internal dock and exit by the massive flat bit of the large prow opening. As crappier ripoffs of the Corellian ships they arent fitted with a hyperdrive.
The main doors open when the Corvetes are are launched, leaving the Torturer open to fire during this time as it means powering down shields for the whole vessel for 3 Minutes to even express launch them. Any turbolaser blast or proton torpedo which gets inside will seriously damage the ship.
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Oh. And as production might end up taking long amounts of time, harsh levels of theologically mandated working for no extra pay would become law. Ergo things produced quicker but often worse constructed.
Lord Bane Hax
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| Mike | Date: Sunday, 13 April 14, 1:40 PM | Message # 5 |
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| For starters, deny the equivalent of the W-165 and the M68. These are just too heavy for any ship, as we've seen in other requests.
I need firing arcs for other weapons before I can go on to those, and can you clarify what a heavy repulsor beam array is please?
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| Crown_Prince_Ordan | Date: Sunday, 13 April 14, 1:44 PM | Message # 6 |
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| I'd like you to consider that you did propose a tank with weaponary comparable to some of the guns on this ship. Also that these heavy weapons are totally fixed angle, no aiming, so the ship would have to orient itself at the enemy to fire any weapon at it. i.e. They couldn't hit the broadside of a Invincible-class Star Dreadnaught, even that could get out of the way - they threaten planets but I'd add a caveat they wouldn't be used on planets.
So to clarify
Any non-stationary object is not threatened by the weapons. The ship just cant turn fast enough (45 degrees a post) to keep even the slowest largest capital ships in its sights.
The planetary grade weapons can't be used against planets.
They are thus paper dragons. Terror weapons to invoke fear but never truly to be effective in battle.
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By the Providence of the Universe, of the Sovereign World of Alderaan, of Avirandel, Delaya, Avishan and Raisa and of His other Realms and Territories, Prince-Regent. Head of the Alderaaan Sector Commonwealth, Defender of Secularism and Steward of the Commenor Run. &c
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| Mike | Date: Thursday, 17 April 14, 3:12 AM | Message # 7 |
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| I did consider this. However, I also dropped the gun down on the tank to something more acceptable.
I highly urge you to do the same, because after consideration, it's still a no-go. I'm sure Jace would say the same, if he had time to look over the flood of requests that get poured on him.
In short, drop the guns to something smaller and then we'll talk.
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| Jamie_the_Hutt | Date: Thursday, 24 April 14, 1:26 AM | Message # 8 |
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| Just wondering if we could hold off till Jace. This is a set and prop which will be destroyed with the Pius Dea cult sls conclusion...
Jace seemed amenable when we discussed it yesterday at current gunnery.
Fact is it will be rapidly destroyed as soon as it shows its face or even before if Republic players feel more hostile than usual.
It'll be captained by me and clearly I am not going to be ridiculous with it.Added (24 April 14, 1:26 AM)
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Minor bump. Like to get this one cleared off.
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| Bane_Hax | Date: Friday, 09 May 14, 8:47 AM | Message # 9 |
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| Yeah I took out all the pipeline BS and just requested the takeover plus an initial settlement fleet. Hope this is more agreeable and will be more easily approved now its just some armed freighters and no major development initially (to be requested in future if it happens through RP)
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| Mike | Date: Friday, 09 May 14, 10:17 AM | Message # 10 |
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| Quote Length: 3200m
Width: 750m
Height: 800m
Cargo Capacity: 57,000 Tons
Consumables: 6 Months
Hyperdrive: Class 2
Backup: Class 10
Shielding: Equipped
Sensors: Equipped
Navigation: Nav Computer
Personnel
Crew: 100
Gunners: 30
Passengers: 250 - 300
Armament:
x3 Medium Turbolaser Cannons
x24 Point Defense Laser Cannons
The above lists the stats for the Giga-class freighters, armed as per AGW stats. Approve.
Quote Bane_Hax (  ) 10 Space Master Medium Transports (Half of the dual laser cannons on each upgraded to dual turbolasers)
4 Action-class Transports upgraded to carry 6 Turbolaser cannons (similar to the Interceptor-class but not totally refitted just with 6 TLs)
Approve.
Since the rest was streamlined and easier to deal with, it is now Approved.
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